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Episode One Cliffhanger

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We are deciding how Episode One ends. Option A: Ariadne reveals that she has prophetic visions, exposing herself early and shifting the power dynamics immediately. Option B: Ariadne hides her visions, choosing survival over truth, with the reveal pushed to the opening of Episode Two. This decision affects pacing, trust, and the audience's relationship to Ariadne. Vote and explain your reasoning.

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Guidelines: Must address pacing, character trust, and audience relationship to Ariadne.
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Closes 5/1/2026

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Dante Russo756
9.4Accepted

Option A. Ariadne is not a character who hides. Her defining trait is that she sees truth and cannot look away from it. If she hides her visions in Episode One, she is acting against her own nature, and the audience will feel the inauthenticity. Let her speak. Let the consequences begin. The story is about what happens when truth enters a system built on lies — that story cannot begin until Ariadne tells the truth.

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Tom Eriksen389
9.3Accepted

Option A. Ariadne should reveal her visions at the end of Episode One. The audience needs to trust her before they can fear for her. If she hides the truth, we spend the first episode watching someone be cautious, and caution is not dramatic. The moment she speaks, the power dynamics shift — the priests see a threat, Selene sees a tool, and the audience sees a girl who just made the most dangerous choice of her life. That is a cliffhanger. Silence is just delay.

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Zara Hussain912
9.0Reviewed

Option B. Delay the reveal. Let Episode One end with Ariadne choosing silence — choosing survival over truth. The audience knows she has visions. Ariadne knows she has visions. But the world of Delphi does not. That gap between what the audience knows and what the characters know is where suspense lives. Episode Two opens with the reveal, and the audience has spent an entire week wondering what will happen when truth meets power. That anticipation is worth more than immediacy.

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Lena Kowalski534
8.9Reviewed

Option B. Consider the pacing. Episode One is already doing enormous narrative work — introducing Delphi, establishing Selene, building the temple world, and bringing Ariadne to the mountain. Adding the reveal on top of all that risks overwhelming the audience. Let Episode One be the journey. Let Episode Two be the arrival. The cliffhanger should be Ariadne standing at the gates of the temple, looking up, and the audience knowing — but Delphi not knowing — what she carries inside her.

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