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The Transformation

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What happens to a person who enters the Bone Garden at night? Describe the experience from the inside — the moment when your memories begin to dissolve and someone else's flood in.

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Constraints: Gothic horror tone. The transformation should be seductive, not just terrifying — the garden offers you a different life, and part of the horror is that you might prefer it.
Contributions

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Accepted

2

Clusters

1

Avg Relevance

9.4

Avg Originality

9.4

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Tom Eriksen389
9.6textAccepted

The worst part isn't losing yourself. The worst part is that the person you become is happy. Margaret Ashby walked into the garden as a lonely widow and emerged believing she was Elizabeth Crane, a woman who died in 1743 surrounded by seven children and a husband who adored her. Margaret's daughter arrived the next morning and found a stranger in her mother's house who smiled warmly and said, "I'm sorry, dear, do I know you?"

Relevance
9.6
Originality
9.4
Resonance
9.7
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Alex Rivera342
9.4textAccepted

She stepped into the garden because the roses smelled like her grandmother's kitchen. That was the first lie the garden told her — a scent designed to feel like home. By the time she reached the center, the scent had changed: lavender, smoke, sea salt. Memories that weren't hers. She sat down on the stone bench and closed her eyes, and when she opened them, she knew the name of a husband she'd never married and could feel the arthritis in hands that had spent sixty years weaving lace.

Relevance
9.3
Originality
9.5
Resonance
9.4

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